Tuesday, June 11, 2013
*RESTRICTION*
just because i'm typing this in green doesn't make this message a nice one. (i can't use red because of my background) anyway i don't like to be demanding since that's not how i am but i wonder how my chapters gets all these views but they only gets 1 or 2 comments. i get comments from my brand new follower (LiyahBarbie) more than people who have been reading this blog from day one. i'm desperate enough to read negative comments at this point. if you don't like this blog that is fine just tell me. tell me what you don't like, what you want to change and i'll take it into consideration. i understand that some people read off their phones and they can't comment from the type of phone they have. i can relate to you i've been in that situation. however to those who can comment i'd appreciate it if you did. i have triple digit views i at least expect double digit comments. and until i get that on my last chapter i'm not going to post the next chapter. i'm not going to keep writing if people don't like it. on the bright side i've thought of another storyline and if i can get the details right in my head i'll make another blog for it.
Thursday, June 6, 2013
it's war pt.2 ch.22
'"it's now 2:30 in the afternoon my soldiers are on there way. nicki's have yet to arrive as well,"drake said into his camera. he slowly crept into the living room and came up behind the couch nicki was sitting on.
"i'm stalking the prey. i'm examining its interaction among its habitat," drake whispered.
"you know i can hear you right?"
"the prey is becoming rowdy. i know exactly what will tame it," drake muttered in her ear.
"oh really, drake if you touch me i'll deck yo ass in the face," she threatened.
"i won't doubt its abilities to attack. it seems to amaze me every time with its talents. but..."
"but what," nicki interrupted.
"its senses may be strong but it never knows when i'll attack," he said while gradually raising his voice.
"drake you sound like a dork."
"taunting ehh we'll see about that," he said while jumping over the couch and started tickling her.
"nooooo," she whined. drake held the camera in his mouth and started tickling her with both hands. nicki started to laugh uncontrollably. her face was turning red and tears were pouring out her eyes.
"stooopppp i'mm sooorrrryyyyyy!!!!!" she laughed. but no matter how much she pleaded he didn't stop.
"MMMMAAAAMMMAA!!!!!!" nicki yelled. drake tried to cover her mouth while tickling her with the other, but nicki kept screaming.
"yes honey!?!" mamma G yelled back but only got muffled sounds as a response. mamma G left her room and went downstairs to find drake on top of a red faced, teary eyed nicki.
"AUBREY DRAKE GRAHAM GET OFF OF HER RIGHT NOW!!!!!!!" mamma G yelled. drake sprung off nicki and put his hands up in defense.
"momma it's war if she can't take it she might as well forfeit. plus she threatened to punch me. she was taunting me mamma," drake said defensively. mamma G went over to the couch and helped nicki up.
"nick is that true?" mamma G asked. nick shook her head no while trying to catch her breath.
"ma she lyin i got it all on camera."
"give me the that. you should be ashamed of yourself." mamma G focused the camera on drake and said, "nicki got get him." she pushed nicki in the direction of drake.
"no ma i was just simply defending myself." he said moving from nicki.
"aubrey stop moving. nicki to your right," mamma G instructed. nicki felt him slapping her arms away so she knew she was close. she started swinging willy nilly and drake fell to the floor. nicki got a hold of his shirt and started punching him harder, while mamma G yelled," GET HIM NICKI," repeatedly in the background. the chants was only making nicki hit him harder and faster than before. when nicki was finished she kicked him and mamma G hugged her.
"good job honey," she said while squeezing her tightly.
"now that was caught on camera," mamma G said while placing the camera beside him and taking nicki upstairs to get ready for the water fight. drake rolled over and held his arm in pain since that was what she was mainly hitting.
"this isn't' over!!! this is far from over!!!!!" he yelled. he stood up and grabbed the camera.
"i've been attacked by two enemies. this is truely war," he said before turning off the camera. he went upstairs and got prepared too. he wore some camouflage pants, with a tie around his head, black boots, with no shirt and two stripes of black paint on each cheek. by the time he was finished people started arriving. he greeted all his soldiers and mean mugged all hers. they went to the backyard to find nerf guns and vests all around. he waited for everyone to get there before he told them what the rules are.
"okay so this is what is going to happen. everyone has a gun and a vest. now the vest are specially made to weigh you down when it's full of water. once you're down you're down. the concept of the game is to eliminate all the soldiers on the other team. the rule is there are no rules," drake said before putting on his vest and picking up his gun.
"oh if you fall in the pool take the vest off so you don't drown. after my team wins,"drake stopped to smile at his cockiness. "we'll have a pool party but we can't if you die in my pool. soooo playsafe kids." everybody put on their vest and picked up a gun.
"oh and one last thing before we start, if your team captain, which is me for the winners and nicki for the losers, is soaked no matter who is winning that team automatically loses. so make sure to protect your captain. we'll start in 15 minutes. that gives you enough time to set up a game plan," drake informed before gathering his people and working out a plan. he went over to his mom and asked,"ma since you're not playing would you record it?"
"no problem honey," she said before taking the camera. drake checked his watch and ran back to his team.
"the game starts in 5......4.......3.......2......1!!!!!!"he yelled. once he said one everybody went crazy. water was flying everywhere and people were dropping like bricks. drake was heavily guarded by his team and apparently she was too because he couldn't see her. she was his only target and his main goal. he continued to look through the crowd of people that were rapidly decreasing. he finally spotted her, but was so distracted by the man that was all up on her, that he didn't notice someone was getting him from behind. he ran and hid behind some trees to try and get his head straight. he peaked out to find that almost everybody was down it was and even plain field. he ran back out and helped his remaining players but soon it was just him nicki and the brown eyed bastard that was all in her space.
*DRAKE*
it was like me and him were having a stare down. no one moved, no one did as much as blink. i didn't like the way he positioned nicki behind him as if i'm going to hurt her. i outta beat his ass just for touching her. we both pulled the trigger on our guns but both of us were out of water. we dropped it slowly keeping our eyes on each other. then as if on cue we both ran to a down soldier and took their gun. i got to mines first and took dat nigga down. i felt good as hell but i wish the nigga fell into the pool and was unable to take off the damn vest. i walked over to nicki with a sly grin on my face as if she could see me and pointed my gun at her. being me of course i had to say a corny line from a movie.
"say your last words nika." before my ass could blink twice she pulled a water hose from behind her back and started swinging it around taking my ass down. everything felt like it was going in slow motion but i hit the ground within seconds. as soon as i hit the dirt her team sprung up in triumph. that brian mcknight wanna be picked her up and started swinging her around as if that's his girl. i was about to push the nigga off of her but the damn vest held me down. that's when it finally dawned on me, i lost. in an instant i became somewhat disappointed i really wanted that damn kiss. not like i got feelings for her it's just that it would have been nice and what man wouldn't want somebody calling them papi you know what i mean. anyway after that like i promised we partied.
*NO ONE'S POV*
the losing team set up the barbeque and lawn chairs. everyone was having a blast swimming in drake's pool, drinking, mainly just going crazy. drake was barbecuing steak, hot dogs, and burgers while his mom helped him.
"oh aubrey here's your camera," she said taking it out of her apron and giving it to him. drake dropped what he was doing and wiped his hands before taking the camera. he completely forgot she was recording the fight.
"ma did you record everything?"
"'yeah."
"are you sure?" he said while fast forwarding through the video.
"yes sweety." drake started the video from the beginning and watched it to the end. he was smiling at some parts especially the part when he shot that i unknown man. drake started looking for nicki because he still hadn't given her her props for beating him at the end. he spotted her sitting in a lawn chair with mystery man and had an offended look on his face that caught his mom's attention.
"honey what's wrong?"
"ma do you know who that is?" he asked pointing to mystery man.
"oh that's brian he's my friend's son," she said as if it was nothing.
"okay but what is he doing here?" drake asked impatiently.
"well me and nicki bumped into him one day at the mall and he seemed very infatuated with her. so we exchanged numbers and they have been talking ever since. so when this water fight came up she asked him if he wanted to play and he said yes and here he is," she said in one quick breath.
"how did they exchange numbers when she doesn't have a phone."
"she talks to him on my phone," she said fixing a burger, wrapping it in tin foil and putting it with the rest.
"ma i don't like him. he's all in her space. touching her and her hair..........he just gives off a bad vibe," he said with a sour face.
"ohh hush up drake he's a very nice guy he's sweet, charming, handsome, and intelligent. you would like him if you talked to him. you two are very much alike. you know he reminds me of you in away," she reassured. drake rolled his eyes before walking over to nicki.
"hey nic," he said standing right infront of her.
"hello loser," she said in a mocking tone.
"mhm i just came over to tell you congrats. you won and a deal is a deal."
"aww thank you," she said blushing a little.
"and i came bearing gifts," he said pulling a wrapped up steak from behind his back. "i know how you like my steaks so i saved you one before they were all gone."
"OOMMMGGG!!! you cooked steak? thank you drake but if this is some type of way of getting out of our bet it's not working," she said smiling.
"oh noo a bet is a bet i gave you my word so i'll teach you."
"teach her what?" brain asked finally getting into the conversation.
"he said if he lost the water fight he had to teach me how to drive."
"uhh how are you going to do that?" brain asked.
"why don't you let me worry about that" drake said slightly harsh but with a smile on his face. brain brushed it off and smiled back at him not taking it to heart. the environment became awkward and quiet. the only thing being heard is people screaming and the splash of water.
"so what did you have to do if you lost?" he asked nicki trying to ease the mood.
"uh i had to give him a kiss and call him something. i don't remember because i knew i was gonna win," she said cocky. brain just shook his head.
"yeah, nika i'll just put this in the refrigerator and cut it up like you like it," he said referring to the steak. he bent down and kissed her on the side of her lip before he went inside. nicki was blushing really hard by his actions then continued her conversation with brain. the conversation was actually getting interesting until-
"uhh excuse me can i talk to you for a minute nicki?" she asked.
"lauren?"
*COMMENT PLEASE SORRY FOR KEEPING YOU WAITING AND THANKING FOR ALL THE NEW COMMENTS AND FOLLOWERS IT MEANS ALOT*
"i'm stalking the prey. i'm examining its interaction among its habitat," drake whispered.
"you know i can hear you right?"
"the prey is becoming rowdy. i know exactly what will tame it," drake muttered in her ear.
"oh really, drake if you touch me i'll deck yo ass in the face," she threatened.
"i won't doubt its abilities to attack. it seems to amaze me every time with its talents. but..."
"but what," nicki interrupted.
"its senses may be strong but it never knows when i'll attack," he said while gradually raising his voice.
"drake you sound like a dork."
"taunting ehh we'll see about that," he said while jumping over the couch and started tickling her.
"nooooo," she whined. drake held the camera in his mouth and started tickling her with both hands. nicki started to laugh uncontrollably. her face was turning red and tears were pouring out her eyes.
"stooopppp i'mm sooorrrryyyyyy!!!!!" she laughed. but no matter how much she pleaded he didn't stop.
"MMMMAAAAMMMAA!!!!!!" nicki yelled. drake tried to cover her mouth while tickling her with the other, but nicki kept screaming.
"yes honey!?!" mamma G yelled back but only got muffled sounds as a response. mamma G left her room and went downstairs to find drake on top of a red faced, teary eyed nicki.
"AUBREY DRAKE GRAHAM GET OFF OF HER RIGHT NOW!!!!!!!" mamma G yelled. drake sprung off nicki and put his hands up in defense.
"momma it's war if she can't take it she might as well forfeit. plus she threatened to punch me. she was taunting me mamma," drake said defensively. mamma G went over to the couch and helped nicki up.
"nick is that true?" mamma G asked. nick shook her head no while trying to catch her breath.
"ma she lyin i got it all on camera."
"give me the that. you should be ashamed of yourself." mamma G focused the camera on drake and said, "nicki got get him." she pushed nicki in the direction of drake.
"no ma i was just simply defending myself." he said moving from nicki.
"aubrey stop moving. nicki to your right," mamma G instructed. nicki felt him slapping her arms away so she knew she was close. she started swinging willy nilly and drake fell to the floor. nicki got a hold of his shirt and started punching him harder, while mamma G yelled," GET HIM NICKI," repeatedly in the background. the chants was only making nicki hit him harder and faster than before. when nicki was finished she kicked him and mamma G hugged her.
"good job honey," she said while squeezing her tightly.
"now that was caught on camera," mamma G said while placing the camera beside him and taking nicki upstairs to get ready for the water fight. drake rolled over and held his arm in pain since that was what she was mainly hitting.
"this isn't' over!!! this is far from over!!!!!" he yelled. he stood up and grabbed the camera.
"i've been attacked by two enemies. this is truely war," he said before turning off the camera. he went upstairs and got prepared too. he wore some camouflage pants, with a tie around his head, black boots, with no shirt and two stripes of black paint on each cheek. by the time he was finished people started arriving. he greeted all his soldiers and mean mugged all hers. they went to the backyard to find nerf guns and vests all around. he waited for everyone to get there before he told them what the rules are.
"okay so this is what is going to happen. everyone has a gun and a vest. now the vest are specially made to weigh you down when it's full of water. once you're down you're down. the concept of the game is to eliminate all the soldiers on the other team. the rule is there are no rules," drake said before putting on his vest and picking up his gun.
"oh if you fall in the pool take the vest off so you don't drown. after my team wins,"drake stopped to smile at his cockiness. "we'll have a pool party but we can't if you die in my pool. soooo playsafe kids." everybody put on their vest and picked up a gun.
"oh and one last thing before we start, if your team captain, which is me for the winners and nicki for the losers, is soaked no matter who is winning that team automatically loses. so make sure to protect your captain. we'll start in 15 minutes. that gives you enough time to set up a game plan," drake informed before gathering his people and working out a plan. he went over to his mom and asked,"ma since you're not playing would you record it?"
"no problem honey," she said before taking the camera. drake checked his watch and ran back to his team.
"the game starts in 5......4.......3.......2......1!!!!!!"he yelled. once he said one everybody went crazy. water was flying everywhere and people were dropping like bricks. drake was heavily guarded by his team and apparently she was too because he couldn't see her. she was his only target and his main goal. he continued to look through the crowd of people that were rapidly decreasing. he finally spotted her, but was so distracted by the man that was all up on her, that he didn't notice someone was getting him from behind. he ran and hid behind some trees to try and get his head straight. he peaked out to find that almost everybody was down it was and even plain field. he ran back out and helped his remaining players but soon it was just him nicki and the brown eyed bastard that was all in her space.
*DRAKE*
it was like me and him were having a stare down. no one moved, no one did as much as blink. i didn't like the way he positioned nicki behind him as if i'm going to hurt her. i outta beat his ass just for touching her. we both pulled the trigger on our guns but both of us were out of water. we dropped it slowly keeping our eyes on each other. then as if on cue we both ran to a down soldier and took their gun. i got to mines first and took dat nigga down. i felt good as hell but i wish the nigga fell into the pool and was unable to take off the damn vest. i walked over to nicki with a sly grin on my face as if she could see me and pointed my gun at her. being me of course i had to say a corny line from a movie.
"say your last words nika." before my ass could blink twice she pulled a water hose from behind her back and started swinging it around taking my ass down. everything felt like it was going in slow motion but i hit the ground within seconds. as soon as i hit the dirt her team sprung up in triumph. that brian mcknight wanna be picked her up and started swinging her around as if that's his girl. i was about to push the nigga off of her but the damn vest held me down. that's when it finally dawned on me, i lost. in an instant i became somewhat disappointed i really wanted that damn kiss. not like i got feelings for her it's just that it would have been nice and what man wouldn't want somebody calling them papi you know what i mean. anyway after that like i promised we partied.
*NO ONE'S POV*
the losing team set up the barbeque and lawn chairs. everyone was having a blast swimming in drake's pool, drinking, mainly just going crazy. drake was barbecuing steak, hot dogs, and burgers while his mom helped him.
"oh aubrey here's your camera," she said taking it out of her apron and giving it to him. drake dropped what he was doing and wiped his hands before taking the camera. he completely forgot she was recording the fight.
"ma did you record everything?"
"'yeah."
"are you sure?" he said while fast forwarding through the video.
"yes sweety." drake started the video from the beginning and watched it to the end. he was smiling at some parts especially the part when he shot that i unknown man. drake started looking for nicki because he still hadn't given her her props for beating him at the end. he spotted her sitting in a lawn chair with mystery man and had an offended look on his face that caught his mom's attention.
"honey what's wrong?"
"ma do you know who that is?" he asked pointing to mystery man.
"oh that's brian he's my friend's son," she said as if it was nothing.
"okay but what is he doing here?" drake asked impatiently.
"well me and nicki bumped into him one day at the mall and he seemed very infatuated with her. so we exchanged numbers and they have been talking ever since. so when this water fight came up she asked him if he wanted to play and he said yes and here he is," she said in one quick breath.
"how did they exchange numbers when she doesn't have a phone."
"she talks to him on my phone," she said fixing a burger, wrapping it in tin foil and putting it with the rest.
"ma i don't like him. he's all in her space. touching her and her hair..........he just gives off a bad vibe," he said with a sour face.
"ohh hush up drake he's a very nice guy he's sweet, charming, handsome, and intelligent. you would like him if you talked to him. you two are very much alike. you know he reminds me of you in away," she reassured. drake rolled his eyes before walking over to nicki.
"hey nic," he said standing right infront of her.
"hello loser," she said in a mocking tone.
"mhm i just came over to tell you congrats. you won and a deal is a deal."
"aww thank you," she said blushing a little.
"and i came bearing gifts," he said pulling a wrapped up steak from behind his back. "i know how you like my steaks so i saved you one before they were all gone."
"OOMMMGGG!!! you cooked steak? thank you drake but if this is some type of way of getting out of our bet it's not working," she said smiling.
"oh noo a bet is a bet i gave you my word so i'll teach you."
"teach her what?" brain asked finally getting into the conversation.
"he said if he lost the water fight he had to teach me how to drive."
"uhh how are you going to do that?" brain asked.
"why don't you let me worry about that" drake said slightly harsh but with a smile on his face. brain brushed it off and smiled back at him not taking it to heart. the environment became awkward and quiet. the only thing being heard is people screaming and the splash of water.
"so what did you have to do if you lost?" he asked nicki trying to ease the mood.
"uh i had to give him a kiss and call him something. i don't remember because i knew i was gonna win," she said cocky. brain just shook his head.
"yeah, nika i'll just put this in the refrigerator and cut it up like you like it," he said referring to the steak. he bent down and kissed her on the side of her lip before he went inside. nicki was blushing really hard by his actions then continued her conversation with brain. the conversation was actually getting interesting until-
"uhh excuse me can i talk to you for a minute nicki?" she asked.
"lauren?"
*COMMENT PLEASE SORRY FOR KEEPING YOU WAITING AND THANKING FOR ALL THE NEW COMMENTS AND FOLLOWERS IT MEANS ALOT*
Monday, June 3, 2013
*sorry*
i've been super lazy lately. i've had time to write another chapter but i haven't so i'll post sometime this week. i'm so sorry for keeping yall waiting. i'll post soon.
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