authors note: okay i officially love the re-up for being my first follower and i know it sounds sad that i have 1,275 views but only one follower but anyway here is the chapter i promised enjoy
nicki woke up from her slumber completely exhausted. this nap was definitely added to the list of most uncomfortable sleeps ever. she tried to get up but all she felt was immense pain running through her body.
"drake.......drake..........drake," she kept calling his name but got no response. she tried to move again but stopped when she felt a sharp pain in her wrist. she started whining and grunting in agony.
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"you can't spit game for your life," she said while they both started laughing.
"i'm sorry i wasn't trying to spit game if i was you would be naked by now," drake said with such cockiness in his voice.
"really try me."
"okay if you insist." drake went around her and wrapped his arms around her and leaned into her ear. "so what will it take for me to be able to wake up to your beautiful face tomorrow morning," he said kissing her neck after every word. her breath got caught in he throat. she tried her hardest not to moan when she felt his lips on her neck.
"um..........i-i-i-i don't know," she said relaxed in his arms.
"my place or yours," he asked.
"definitely yours," she replied. he grabbed her hand and led her outside. the valet just pulled up with his car and tossed drake the keys. he tried to help her in but she wouldn't move. he looked down at her confused. he started to hear faint noises. he turned away and held his head trying to focus and make out what the voice was saying. he heard his name being called along with some sobbing of some sort. he turned around to ask his date if she heard the noises to but she wasn't there neither was the car. his surrounds started to disappear and his vision started getting blurry.
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Friday, March 15, 2013
Sunday, March 3, 2013
my b-day
okay so today is my birthday and for the whole month of february i've been working on my science project imma finish today (ik sad way to celebrate your birthday) and if i still have time imma post a new chapter if i dont imma have to do it later.
Friday, February 15, 2013
i wanna stay with you ch.16
authors note: i wanna give a shout out to Danielle B and Jamesha Robinson for being my first ever comments yall rock for that. even though i'm sick i'm still posting this chapter cause they made me that happy.
nicki had been in the hospital for three weeks now. today was the day she got out. the doctors believe that her injuries have healed enough and were relieved that she was leaving. nicki was what the doctors called the patient out of hell. she wouldn't eat, cried all day, wouldn't take her meds, and tried countless times to escape. she fought with the nurses and the doctor and wouldn't let anyone visit her but drake. the hospital was more than happy to get nicki out of there.
"okay mr. graham her internal bleeding has stopped, she still have some scratches and bruises. her broken wrist will be fully healed in three weeks here is her discharge papers,"the nurse said super fast trying to speed things up.
"um thank you can i get her perscripti......"
"'here you go got it right here now sign here and you can take her home," the nurse interrupted with such eagerness.
"okay," drake replied looking for a pen. "do you have a....."
"here," she interrupted throwing a pen at him. he signed the paper and took the prescription.
"yeah thanks,"drake said unconvinced. drake led nicki to the car and helped her in.
"where are we going?" nicki asked while drake put on her seat belt.
"i'm going to take you home."
"no i'm not going back there. take me anywhere but there," nicki demanded.
"you have to go home because all your stuff is there. haven't you ignored them enough you wouldn't let them visit you when they did come you gave them the silent treatment. nicki enough is enough,"drake reasoned.
"i didn't ignore them i ignored lauren and don't want to be around her."
"why?"
"because she is a bitch that needs to learn how to keep my families name out her mouth,"nicki said through clenched teeth. the car got silent drake didn't know what to tell her to change her mind. she seemed pretty serious about it. nicki crossed her arms over her chest and let the tear she has been holding on to slowly fall down her cheek. drake, not wanting to upset her even more, gave up.
"okay then where do you want to go?" drake asked starting the car.
"can i stay with you please. just for awhile," she asked uncrossing her arms.
"i don't know if that is a good idea what if......."
"please just for awhile i don't want to go back there," nicki pleaded wiping her eyes. the car went silent again and he turned the car off.
"i don't know how to take care of you like lauren and tt does. it would be best for your well being if you stay with them."
"i am not a baby i don't need anybody to take care of me," nicki said raising her voice.
"then why are you asking to live with me? huh? nic you're not eligible to live by yourself and you know that. you need someone to be with you and it would be safer and wise to live with the people you grew up with," drake reasoned.
"drake please," nicki was barely able to get out through the tears. drake was stressed out and just wanted to go home and take a hot shower. if taking nicki with him would make the process faster then he was willing to do that.
"alright nicki just.......just stop crying please."
"thanks," nicki said while feeling for him and giving him a hug. drake started the car and drove to his condo. by the time he got there she was sleeping against the window. he turned the car off and went over to the passenger's side of the car. he opened the door slowly and caught her head before it fell. he unbuckled her seat belt and carried her inside the house. he laid her down in the guest room before he went to his room and took a long hot shower. he got out and went straight to bed with nothing but his boxers on.
"this is gong to take a lot of getting used to.
*comment please*
Saturday, February 2, 2013
please hold me pt.3 ch.15
*PRESENT*
"nicki where are you!?!?!" lauren asked panicking. "I JUST CAN'T TAKE IT ANYMORE I HATE MY LIFE!!!!!!" nick cried. tt took the phone away from lauren, "nicki don't say that... just tell me where you are and i'll come pick you up and we can talk about it," tt reasoned. all she heard as a response on the other line was sobbing, sniffling and the pitter patter of rain in the back ground. "nicki.....nicki....nic please answer me," tt pleaded. nicki was breathing so hard contemplating her next move. "goodbye," "what nicki wai....." tt was interrupted by the buzzing of lauren's phone indicating the call ended.
nicki started walking. every step she took her vision became more clearer and she became younger. the rain was clearing up and soon there was nothing but the moon in the sky. she continued to walk until she was in front of her childhood home, as the ten year old onika. she walked up the stairs to her front porch and stood there. she hesitantly reached for the door knob then stopped. she took a deep breath and put her hand on the knob. slowly she turned the knob and walked in. she was bum rushed by her mom yelling her name and hugging and kissing her.
"nicki are you okay?!did anyone try to hurt you?! carol panicked while checking if she had any bruises or scratches."don't you ever run out like that do you understand me onika?"
"yes mommy,"nicki replied on the verge of tears. nicki felt like she had no control of her body. she felt as if she was there re living the worst day of her life. carol seeing her daughter a little out of it, engulfed nicki into a huge embrace. nicki soaked it all in missing her mothers hugs.
"are you hungry?" carol asked still hugging nicki.
"no," nicki replied.
"okay got upstairs and go to bed okay?"
"okay mommy,"nick made her way up stairs and to do what her mom told her to do. her older brother already went to sleep. so she went straight into the room that she shared with her younger brother. he was asleep too. she crawled into her bed.
"no don't go to sleep!!! you have to save your family!!! nooo!!!" nicki screamed while her body was slowly going to sleep. she closed her eyes only to be awoken by smell of smoke. nicki jumped out of her bed. the room was filled with smoke. she ran over to her little brothers bed, "makiya wake up!!" nicki screamed. he didnt move. nicki kept trying but soon the smoke became to much. she was coughing violently. she ran out the room and stumbled down the stars. "MOM!!!!!....JELANI!!!!...." she screamed but got no answer.
"nicki.....nicki.....nicki....nicki..." she heard her name being called in the distance. she started yelling there names again but she got no response. she felt her body being roughly shaken. she woke up in a pile of tears, 24 years old and blind. she was breathing heavily and her skin felt like it was on fire. a fast beeping sound in the background made nicki panic even more. she felt someone hold her.
" shhhhh it's all right you're okay i got you, i got you," drake said calming her down, she relaxed in his arms.
"where am i," nicki choked out.
" you're in the hospital don't worry you're okay," drake replied. the beeping on her monitor was slowing down.
" hold me tighter drake," she pleaded.
"okay," he held her closer to him while pressing a button on the side of her bed calling for a nurse."just go back to sleep okay?" she shook her head then fell asleep on his chest.
*sorry for any eras *
"nicki where are you!?!?!" lauren asked panicking. "I JUST CAN'T TAKE IT ANYMORE I HATE MY LIFE!!!!!!" nick cried. tt took the phone away from lauren, "nicki don't say that... just tell me where you are and i'll come pick you up and we can talk about it," tt reasoned. all she heard as a response on the other line was sobbing, sniffling and the pitter patter of rain in the back ground. "nicki.....nicki....nic please answer me," tt pleaded. nicki was breathing so hard contemplating her next move. "goodbye," "what nicki wai....." tt was interrupted by the buzzing of lauren's phone indicating the call ended.
nicki started walking. every step she took her vision became more clearer and she became younger. the rain was clearing up and soon there was nothing but the moon in the sky. she continued to walk until she was in front of her childhood home, as the ten year old onika. she walked up the stairs to her front porch and stood there. she hesitantly reached for the door knob then stopped. she took a deep breath and put her hand on the knob. slowly she turned the knob and walked in. she was bum rushed by her mom yelling her name and hugging and kissing her.
"nicki are you okay?!did anyone try to hurt you?! carol panicked while checking if she had any bruises or scratches."don't you ever run out like that do you understand me onika?"
"yes mommy,"nicki replied on the verge of tears. nicki felt like she had no control of her body. she felt as if she was there re living the worst day of her life. carol seeing her daughter a little out of it, engulfed nicki into a huge embrace. nicki soaked it all in missing her mothers hugs.
"are you hungry?" carol asked still hugging nicki.
"no," nicki replied.
"okay got upstairs and go to bed okay?"
"okay mommy,"nick made her way up stairs and to do what her mom told her to do. her older brother already went to sleep. so she went straight into the room that she shared with her younger brother. he was asleep too. she crawled into her bed.
"no don't go to sleep!!! you have to save your family!!! nooo!!!" nicki screamed while her body was slowly going to sleep. she closed her eyes only to be awoken by smell of smoke. nicki jumped out of her bed. the room was filled with smoke. she ran over to her little brothers bed, "makiya wake up!!" nicki screamed. he didnt move. nicki kept trying but soon the smoke became to much. she was coughing violently. she ran out the room and stumbled down the stars. "MOM!!!!!....JELANI!!!!...." she screamed but got no answer.
"nicki.....nicki.....nicki....nicki..." she heard her name being called in the distance. she started yelling there names again but she got no response. she felt her body being roughly shaken. she woke up in a pile of tears, 24 years old and blind. she was breathing heavily and her skin felt like it was on fire. a fast beeping sound in the background made nicki panic even more. she felt someone hold her.
" shhhhh it's all right you're okay i got you, i got you," drake said calming her down, she relaxed in his arms.
"where am i," nicki choked out.
" you're in the hospital don't worry you're okay," drake replied. the beeping on her monitor was slowing down.
" hold me tighter drake," she pleaded.
"okay," he held her closer to him while pressing a button on the side of her bed calling for a nurse."just go back to sleep okay?" she shook her head then fell asleep on his chest.
*sorry for any eras *
Sunday, January 27, 2013
please hold me pt.2 ch.14
it started to rain. a drop of precipitation on her cheek woke nicki up from her unconscious state. she couldn't tell how long she was out. all she knew was it was raining and freezing cold. she slowly got to her feet feeling light headed. she began to walk straight having no idea where she was going as long as it was away from everyone and everything. she was walking for a good two hours before her legs could no longer hold her weight. she was feeling around for something to grab but to no avail. she felt so weak, underestimating her injuries. she laid down and feeling defeated and started to silently cry.
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"i couldn't find her. lauren are you sure she went left when she entered the woods?" drake asked.
"yes i was following her and then she just disappeared," she choked out. this was drake's 5th time looking for nicki in the woods. it has been six hours since nicki disappeared.
"that's it i'm calling the police," drake said reaching for the house phone.
"NO wait because if you do she would be in the center of attention and she will hate me even more," lauren said taking the phone and wiping her loose tears.
"laur she doesn't hate you," tt tried to sympathize.
"yes she does she basically said that."
"lauren i believe she hates me more than you. i'm the one who got the shoe to the balls," drake joked. lauren and tt started to laugh.
"omg about that are you okay."
"mhm, i'm gonna go back out there and look for her i'll be back in a few," drake stated.
"okay sb is coming over to help," tt informed.
"okay tell him to meet me there," drake said while walking out the house. drake jogged the trail and stopped at a hill. "dead end. where could she have gone?" drake asked getting frustrated. he heard movement behind him.
"nicki?"
"naw man it's me," sb said walking up to drake.
"oh."
"no luck huh."
"no. i don't know where she could have gone. i've check the whole area she just up and disappeared," drake said sitting down in the wet dirt putting his hands in his hands.
"we can find her," sb said while sitting beside him. "how far could she have gone. she's blind for god sake she can't even see where she is going. how could she have just vanished?" sb questioned.
"man i don't know sh--" drake paused looking down the steep hill. "i'm and idiot," drake said before running down the hill. near the end drake tripped and slid the rest of the way to the bottom. no fazed by it drake started running.
"what is it!!!!!" sb yelled cautiously went down the hill. drake ignored him and kept running in the rain. running anywhere, every where as long as it led to her. while slipping and sliding on the wet ground, drake wouldn't slow down. after he reached about a mile and a half he started yelling her name.
"NICKI.......NICKI......NICKI......NICKI.....NICKI!!!!!!"
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the sound of someones voice made nicki feel as if she was being paranoid. she stopped crying a few minutes ago she was just laying there being soaked by the rain. till she heard the voice come closer and the closer it came the words and the voice came out more clear. drake was yelling her name. seeing this as her only chance of survival she used the only energy she had left to scream his name.
"DRAKE I'M OVER HEAR.....*cough*.......DRAKE.....DRAKE.....DRAKE," nicki coughed/cried. the warmth of his arms wrapped around her mad her feel safe.
"nicki....nicki....nicki....nicki...."the sound of his voice became smaller till she couldn't here it anymore, as she fell back int an unconscious state.
TO BE CONTINUED...............
"yes i was following her and then she just disappeared," she choked out. this was drake's 5th time looking for nicki in the woods. it has been six hours since nicki disappeared.
"that's it i'm calling the police," drake said reaching for the house phone.
"NO wait because if you do she would be in the center of attention and she will hate me even more," lauren said taking the phone and wiping her loose tears.
"laur she doesn't hate you," tt tried to sympathize.
"yes she does she basically said that."
"lauren i believe she hates me more than you. i'm the one who got the shoe to the balls," drake joked. lauren and tt started to laugh.
"omg about that are you okay."
"mhm, i'm gonna go back out there and look for her i'll be back in a few," drake stated.
"okay sb is coming over to help," tt informed.
"okay tell him to meet me there," drake said while walking out the house. drake jogged the trail and stopped at a hill. "dead end. where could she have gone?" drake asked getting frustrated. he heard movement behind him.
"nicki?"
"naw man it's me," sb said walking up to drake.
"oh."
"no luck huh."
"no. i don't know where she could have gone. i've check the whole area she just up and disappeared," drake said sitting down in the wet dirt putting his hands in his hands.
"we can find her," sb said while sitting beside him. "how far could she have gone. she's blind for god sake she can't even see where she is going. how could she have just vanished?" sb questioned.
"man i don't know sh--" drake paused looking down the steep hill. "i'm and idiot," drake said before running down the hill. near the end drake tripped and slid the rest of the way to the bottom. no fazed by it drake started running.
"what is it!!!!!" sb yelled cautiously went down the hill. drake ignored him and kept running in the rain. running anywhere, every where as long as it led to her. while slipping and sliding on the wet ground, drake wouldn't slow down. after he reached about a mile and a half he started yelling her name.
"NICKI.......NICKI......NICKI......NICKI.....NICKI!!!!!!"
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the sound of someones voice made nicki feel as if she was being paranoid. she stopped crying a few minutes ago she was just laying there being soaked by the rain. till she heard the voice come closer and the closer it came the words and the voice came out more clear. drake was yelling her name. seeing this as her only chance of survival she used the only energy she had left to scream his name.
"DRAKE I'M OVER HEAR.....*cough*.......DRAKE.....DRAKE.....DRAKE," nicki coughed/cried. the warmth of his arms wrapped around her mad her feel safe.
"nicki....nicki....nicki....nicki...."the sound of his voice became smaller till she couldn't here it anymore, as she fell back int an unconscious state.
TO BE CONTINUED...............
Saturday, January 19, 2013
please hold me pt.1 ch.13
"nicki where are you!?!?!" lauren asked panicking. "I JUST CAN'T TAKE IT ANYMORE I HATE MY LIFE!!!!!!" nick cried. tt took the phone away from lauren, "nicki don't say that... just tell me where you are and i'll come pick you up and we can talk about it," tt reasoned. all she heard as a response on the other line was sobbing, sniffling and the pitter patter of rain in the back ground. "nicki.....nicki....nic please answer me," tt pleaded. nicki was breathing so hard contemplating her next move. "goodbye," "what nicki wai....." tt was interrupted by the buzzing of lauren's phone indicating the call ended.
12 HOURS BEFORE
three months have passed since drake and nicki meet. they have been getting along very VERY well. they became best friends and talked daily. it seemed as if they had a daily routine. drake would wake up call her and talk to her for two good hours. they would take a shower (not together or in the same place) brush their teeth etc. drake would go to work, while nicki would sculpt, paint or make pottery. after they did that it would be around 5 o'clock when drake would come over and they would talk and joke around till she'd fall asleep. he would tuck her in and kiss her goodnight before leaving and going home. but today was different drake called her but she didn't pick up he tried a few more times but still nothing. he shook it off deciding to call her later. he got ready and went to gis exhibit. while drake was working on his new exhibit he couldn't shake the feeling that something was wrong. he stopped and decided to call nicki again. still no answer. wanting to give nicki space so she doesn't find him as a stalker, drake decided to wait till later and drop by her house.
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" nicki i know you're hungry. open the door i have some of your favorites Chinese rice with some sea food on the side," lauren convinced. she got no answer so she went on. " its that fish you like with shrimp and soda. i don't have any steak or salad i didn't think that would be a good mix," lauren humored. with no response lauren gave up. "fine nicki you win i know what today is and what happened on this date depresses you but you won't have to feel alone if you'd let us in. we all love you and you always distance yourself from us around this time and a few weeks after. its not fun for you and you make it the same for us. hopefully one year you would spend this day around the people that love you instead of in your room." with that lauren left her door and went down the stairs.
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*NICKI'S POV*
no one understands me." stay around the people that love you," what a bunch of bull. IS SHE INTENTIONALLY TRYING PISS ME OFF!!!! SHE KNOWS DAMN WELL THE ONLY PEOPLE THAT LOVED ME ARE DEAD!!!!!! and it's all my fault.
*NO ONE'S POV*
nicki started to cry for the umpteenth time today. today was the fourteenth anniversary of her families death. every year at this time she would lock herself in her room and go over the scenes of that day in her head over and over again. this time for some reason she was hurting more. something was different about this year something was off. she was aware of drake's missed calls and every time her phone rang she didn't even flinch. she was in and out of sleep. when she wasn't asleep she was crying. when she was asleep she was having nightmares about that night. she was a wreck.
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drake was on his way of nicki's house. he finished the day early because he knew something wasn't right. when he go there he knocked on the door impatiently. tt answered and he walked right passed her to nicki's room. he tried to open the door but it was locked and she never locked her door. "nicki are you okay its me drake." he got no response. lauren walked out of her room from across the hallway.
"she's not gong to answer you she is always like this at this time."
"what are you talking about," drake said while turning around.
"today is the day her family died. it happened along time ago when she was around ten or eleven. she became depressed ever since. so depressed she lost her eye sight. the incident blurred her vision but she could see after they got her out of there."
" got her out of what," drake questioned. before lauren could respond nicki swung her door open banging it on the wall.
"lauren shut up," nicki said through gritted teeth. " you know nothing absolutely nothing about what happened so my family shouldn't be coming out your mouth!!!!!" she screamed this time.
"nicki i'm sorry i di...." before she could finish nicki pushed through her and drake and started to speed walk down the stairs. tripping over the last one she felt her way to the back door. drake jogged after her and grabbed her waist while she was trying to unlock the door. "nicki calm down lets talk." nicki didn't say anything she kept trying to unlock the door feeling her way to the knob pulling at it. she was becoming frustrated tears pouring out of her eyes. "nicki stop lets sit down and talk okay," drake said putting his hand on her face and wiping away some of her tears. she smacked his hand finding the lock and knob again. finally turning it the right way the door opened. "nicki stop," he said closing the door still holding her waist. he grabbed her hands and she started to wiggle in his grip. "let go of me now!!!!" "nicki stop fighting me," drake commanded while managing to pick up one leg. nicki started to swing the other leg and it swung in between drake's legs. drake fell to the floor still holding her. she rolled out of his arms as his hands went to hold junior. nicki got on her feet a little unbalanced and felt her way to the door. feeling for the knob, she couldn't find it. lauren ran down the stairs when she heard drake groaning and got on her knees beside him asking what happened. nicki heard her and started panicking feeling for the knob. she finally found it and yanked it open running out the door. "get nicki," drake said while still rolling on the floor in pain. lauren took off after her. chasing her into the wooden area behind the house. nicki was stumbling over sticks having no idea where she was going.she just kept on running. holding on to trees for leverage, she heard some rustling in the back ground and started running even faster. lauren hot on her tails. nicki slipped and rolled down a steep hill. finally reaching the end nicki laid there in so much pain. lauren stopped when she didnt see anymore movement. she started to yell her name but got no answer or so she thought. "lauren, i'm down here," she tried to crock out but it wouldn't come out. lauren turned around and headed toward the house to get drake. nicki laid there feeling dizzy seeing spots. she was trying her hardest to stay calm and awake. but then she started to sink into darkness even darker than it was before.
TO BE CONTINUED.........
comment please sorry for any eras too tired to go over the chapter.
12 HOURS BEFORE
three months have passed since drake and nicki meet. they have been getting along very VERY well. they became best friends and talked daily. it seemed as if they had a daily routine. drake would wake up call her and talk to her for two good hours. they would take a shower (not together or in the same place) brush their teeth etc. drake would go to work, while nicki would sculpt, paint or make pottery. after they did that it would be around 5 o'clock when drake would come over and they would talk and joke around till she'd fall asleep. he would tuck her in and kiss her goodnight before leaving and going home. but today was different drake called her but she didn't pick up he tried a few more times but still nothing. he shook it off deciding to call her later. he got ready and went to gis exhibit. while drake was working on his new exhibit he couldn't shake the feeling that something was wrong. he stopped and decided to call nicki again. still no answer. wanting to give nicki space so she doesn't find him as a stalker, drake decided to wait till later and drop by her house.
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" nicki i know you're hungry. open the door i have some of your favorites Chinese rice with some sea food on the side," lauren convinced. she got no answer so she went on. " its that fish you like with shrimp and soda. i don't have any steak or salad i didn't think that would be a good mix," lauren humored. with no response lauren gave up. "fine nicki you win i know what today is and what happened on this date depresses you but you won't have to feel alone if you'd let us in. we all love you and you always distance yourself from us around this time and a few weeks after. its not fun for you and you make it the same for us. hopefully one year you would spend this day around the people that love you instead of in your room." with that lauren left her door and went down the stairs.
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*NICKI'S POV*
no one understands me." stay around the people that love you," what a bunch of bull. IS SHE INTENTIONALLY TRYING PISS ME OFF!!!! SHE KNOWS DAMN WELL THE ONLY PEOPLE THAT LOVED ME ARE DEAD!!!!!! and it's all my fault.
*NO ONE'S POV*
nicki started to cry for the umpteenth time today. today was the fourteenth anniversary of her families death. every year at this time she would lock herself in her room and go over the scenes of that day in her head over and over again. this time for some reason she was hurting more. something was different about this year something was off. she was aware of drake's missed calls and every time her phone rang she didn't even flinch. she was in and out of sleep. when she wasn't asleep she was crying. when she was asleep she was having nightmares about that night. she was a wreck.
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drake was on his way of nicki's house. he finished the day early because he knew something wasn't right. when he go there he knocked on the door impatiently. tt answered and he walked right passed her to nicki's room. he tried to open the door but it was locked and she never locked her door. "nicki are you okay its me drake." he got no response. lauren walked out of her room from across the hallway.
"she's not gong to answer you she is always like this at this time."
"what are you talking about," drake said while turning around.
"today is the day her family died. it happened along time ago when she was around ten or eleven. she became depressed ever since. so depressed she lost her eye sight. the incident blurred her vision but she could see after they got her out of there."
" got her out of what," drake questioned. before lauren could respond nicki swung her door open banging it on the wall.
"lauren shut up," nicki said through gritted teeth. " you know nothing absolutely nothing about what happened so my family shouldn't be coming out your mouth!!!!!" she screamed this time.
"nicki i'm sorry i di...." before she could finish nicki pushed through her and drake and started to speed walk down the stairs. tripping over the last one she felt her way to the back door. drake jogged after her and grabbed her waist while she was trying to unlock the door. "nicki calm down lets talk." nicki didn't say anything she kept trying to unlock the door feeling her way to the knob pulling at it. she was becoming frustrated tears pouring out of her eyes. "nicki stop lets sit down and talk okay," drake said putting his hand on her face and wiping away some of her tears. she smacked his hand finding the lock and knob again. finally turning it the right way the door opened. "nicki stop," he said closing the door still holding her waist. he grabbed her hands and she started to wiggle in his grip. "let go of me now!!!!" "nicki stop fighting me," drake commanded while managing to pick up one leg. nicki started to swing the other leg and it swung in between drake's legs. drake fell to the floor still holding her. she rolled out of his arms as his hands went to hold junior. nicki got on her feet a little unbalanced and felt her way to the door. feeling for the knob, she couldn't find it. lauren ran down the stairs when she heard drake groaning and got on her knees beside him asking what happened. nicki heard her and started panicking feeling for the knob. she finally found it and yanked it open running out the door. "get nicki," drake said while still rolling on the floor in pain. lauren took off after her. chasing her into the wooden area behind the house. nicki was stumbling over sticks having no idea where she was going.she just kept on running. holding on to trees for leverage, she heard some rustling in the back ground and started running even faster. lauren hot on her tails. nicki slipped and rolled down a steep hill. finally reaching the end nicki laid there in so much pain. lauren stopped when she didnt see anymore movement. she started to yell her name but got no answer or so she thought. "lauren, i'm down here," she tried to crock out but it wouldn't come out. lauren turned around and headed toward the house to get drake. nicki laid there feeling dizzy seeing spots. she was trying her hardest to stay calm and awake. but then she started to sink into darkness even darker than it was before.
TO BE CONTINUED.........
comment please sorry for any eras too tired to go over the chapter.
Monday, January 7, 2013
writers block
this is my first writers block for this story. i'd expected to get my first writers block when i was further along in the story. it's like i know what i want to be next but every time i try to type it up it can't come out.i guess its the stress from basketball. our tournaments is finna start so she works us till we can't stand. anyway when it comes to the story i'm not going to stop posting more chapters even though the lack of comments are killing me slowly. it has come to the point were i think no one really likes it, but then i see how many people read it which gives me hope. but if i get all these views what is stopping people from commenting. so i'll try and get through my writers block. it may take a while since i keep changing how my story line will go. so till next time.
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